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Old November 12th, 2005, 04:54 PM   #41
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Try reading Genoveva Edroza-Matute and Amado V. Hernandez pieces, theyre great, contemporary and very comical except the serious ones.
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Old November 12th, 2005, 04:54 PM   #42
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Try reading Genoveva Edroza-Matute and Amado V. Hernandez pieces, theyre great, contemporary and very comical except the serious ones.
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Old November 14th, 2005, 06:48 PM   #43
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this a part of some published work (conversations with a chair, 1996, road map series).

Minute Details for Tomorrow

i wish
i had
a wishbone
so large
that it
wouldn't fit
my right eyebrow.

it would
sometimes
scold me
to sleep.

doze off
a weary
forthnight
of excuses.

_______


Trees with Umbrellas

trees that complain
of the hotness
of the ground under
are sure to use
umbrellas and
maybe boots.

and wear rabbits
foot for good luck.

trees that have
umbrellas tucked
under their bellies
decry the seeds
of foolish men
and kneel down
for their brains.
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Old November 14th, 2005, 06:48 PM   #44
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this a part of some published work (conversations with a chair, 1996, road map series).

Minute Details for Tomorrow

i wish
i had
a wishbone
so large
that it
wouldn't fit
my right eyebrow.

it would
sometimes
scold me
to sleep.

doze off
a weary
forthnight
of excuses.

_______


Trees with Umbrellas

trees that complain
of the hotness
of the ground under
are sure to use
umbrellas and
maybe boots.

and wear rabbits
foot for good luck.

trees that have
umbrellas tucked
under their bellies
decry the seeds
of foolish men
and kneel down
for their brains.
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Old November 14th, 2005, 06:58 PM   #45
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some works from a sampler pdf.













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Old November 14th, 2005, 06:58 PM   #46
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some works from a sampler pdf.












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Old November 15th, 2005, 01:56 AM   #47
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Is this your stuff? nice!
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Old November 15th, 2005, 01:56 AM   #48
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Old November 15th, 2005, 03:53 AM   #49
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Old November 15th, 2005, 04:03 AM   #51
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Thanks Otakaw for the suggestions


I've noticed during my read of F. Sionil Jose's works that LOSS OF LIBIDO often comes up as a prevalent theme. I think he has issues with that.

Thanks paulkrps, for the images and poetry
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Thanks Otakaw for the suggestions


I've noticed during my read of F. Sionil Jose's works that LOSS OF LIBIDO often comes up as a prevalent theme. I think he has issues with that.

Thanks paulkrps, for the images and poetry
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Old November 15th, 2005, 03:36 PM   #53
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@ bustero, @ tigidig14, @ dancethingy - thanks guys. wrote that a couple of years ago as a sampler for submission to some publication.
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@ bustero, @ tigidig14, @ dancethingy - thanks guys. wrote that a couple of years ago as a sampler for submission to some publication.
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Old November 15th, 2005, 04:23 PM   #55
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@ paul: galeng! nominate kita para national artist. hehe. i saw a streamer of artisthood kanina when i passed by NCCC mall. kung naa ka diri, im sure apil unta ka didto.
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@ paul: galeng! nominate kita para national artist. hehe. i saw a streamer of artisthood kanina when i passed by NCCC mall. kung naa ka diri, im sure apil unta ka didto.
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Old November 15th, 2005, 04:34 PM   #57
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too late lagi dave. but that's ok, currently nagaprepare ko for the ny exhibit with the group.
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too late lagi dave. but that's ok, currently nagaprepare ko for the ny exhibit with the group.
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Old November 15th, 2005, 07:01 PM   #59
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I couldn't respond right away to your poetry Paul because I was searching for words on what it elicited in me. Poetry is so personal such that it cannot be judged. The only reaction is how it affects, how it reaches out and evokes a feeling or a thought from the reader/audience. Your poetry is loaded with imagery and the internal conversation it creates in you. At the outset, my reaction was, to quote from your stanza: "I could not for the heavens of me, tune in to [your] hallowed wisdom." But as I revisited and reread the stanzas, I slowly captured the imagery in your poetry and that just like your photography makes extensive use of the interplay of light and shadow, your prose in poetry uses a unique interplay of words to project the thoughts elicited by those images, and those are very private thoughts. It would be nice to juxtapose those poems with your photographs. It will heighten the feeling and draw us into your reverie.
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I couldn't respond right away to your poetry Paul because I was searching for words on what it elicited in me. Poetry is so personal such that it cannot be judged. The only reaction is how it affects, how it reaches out and evokes a feeling or a thought from the reader/audience. Your poetry is loaded with imagery and the internal conversation it creates in you. At the outset, my reaction was, to quote from your stanza: "I could not for the heavens of me, tune in to [your] hallowed wisdom." But as I revisited and reread the stanzas, I slowly captured the imagery in your poetry and that just like your photography makes extensive use of the interplay of light and shadow, your prose in poetry uses a unique interplay of words to project the thoughts elicited by those images, and those are very private thoughts. It would be nice to juxtapose those poems with your photographs. It will heighten the feeling and draw us into your reverie.

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